Okay - had a rain delay yesterday, but the weather was much more accommodating today I'll give the short version-
1st hive:
top shot

I was pleased with the progress of this hive. it's brood pattern though not perfect looks to my novice eye to be doing alright compared to what i started with...

here is another frame of brood

Then her majesty showed up so I could thank her in person for not having two nail biters on my hands

and as it was my first time finding her, and she is royalty after all, I turned into the paparazzi

but she tired of the limelight and sauntered off to go back to work

to sum up: more bees - better brood pattern than when i received them, eggs in most empty spots, and honey and pollen stores on outside (Not shown) They are taking a fair amount of syrup.
Hive 2
top of hive - forgot to get a photo before smoking them, but hopefully you can see them between the frames and get a good idea of where they are at.

I did not see her majesty in this hive, and the brood pattern continued to be extremely spotty in places (more on that later)
I did find these three gems however -none were capped.

a closer shot

here is that frame of spotty brood mentioned earlier

the innermost did look a bit better though

and they are starting to build up some stores

apparently I took too long with my inspection as the bees started to festoon between the frames

So to sum up, it appears to have more bees than before - brood pattern still not ideal, did not find the queen, 3 supersedure cells - but did see signs of life at all stages - very few eggs though :( They seem to barely be touching their syrup