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Advice please
« on: July 10, 2014, 08:55:44 pm »
What do you folks think of this label? I'm trying to make up my mind about what I want and I'm just not sure I'm there yet. I want something that looks old fashioned. Don't want it girly.


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Re: Advice please
« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2014, 08:58:30 pm »
Looking good to me.  My brother and I actually used vintage gas station logos to develop my label.  You might take a look at these for some inspiration or brain food: https://www.google.com/search?q=vintage+gas+station+logos&espv=2&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=cTa_U9_XBMeWyATVkILgAQ&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ&biw=1366&bih=643

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Re: Advice please
« Reply #2 on: July 10, 2014, 09:01:04 pm »
I like that. Looks "pure and natural".
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« Reply #3 on: July 10, 2014, 09:13:54 pm »
I have to say I'm partial to the black labels, feels forthright and elegant. Just a thought... you might want to try a bee symbol on there somewhere... maybe just above Rosehead Apiaries, afterall, if it weren't for the bees...  just a thought :D

Congrats Randy on your honey!  ;)

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Re: Advice please
« Reply #4 on: July 10, 2014, 09:23:05 pm »
I never really liked the word "Raw" as descriptive of honey.   This might be just a personal thing, but the association in my mind is with raw meat.   Words like pure, fresh, unpasteurised, natural, unprocessed, seem to go better.
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« Reply #5 on: July 10, 2014, 09:25:46 pm »
I like it. :)

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« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2014, 09:27:41 pm »
I'm liking those words as well for honey Pete, good call  :)
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2014, 11:23:59 pm »
rc looks great......doesn't look girly........ :D

like pete i don't care for the term 'raw honey' to describe honey, but i sure like the label and the description of " Pure and Natural" and Locally Produced". 
do you strain your honey?
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #8 on: July 11, 2014, 10:38:16 am »
I'm good with "raw"  but then.. I can eat a steak totaly raw before I can eat it with ANY charring on it..  If I wanted charring I could scrape the grill and eat it..    :laugh:
   No complaints about the label, does look old fashioned.  Going to have to eventually make a label as well.. 
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« Reply #9 on: July 11, 2014, 02:05:54 pm »
I'm really enjoying seeing the labels posted  :)
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #10 on: July 11, 2014, 02:29:36 pm »
I really like the label. Agree with adding a small bee symbol. I would keep the word "raw" or "unprocessed", because people are looking for this product. So many times I have been unsure if the honey was raw or not when making a purchase if they use the word "natural".

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Re: Advice please
« Reply #11 on: July 11, 2014, 05:39:08 pm »
I like it! The only thing I would say is don't print it yourself. You will really use up the black ink.

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Re: Advice please
« Reply #12 on: July 11, 2014, 08:48:16 pm »
Thanks for the comments, Peoples. The word raw seems to be slightly offensive to some and liked by others. I may change it or eliminate it altogether.
Riverbee, I coarsley strain it. Just enough to get the bee legs and ant heads out of it. You can see bits of pollen and sometimes a little wax in it.
I mainly want to convey that this is not Walmart honey. It's as close to eating it straight out of the hive as you can get.

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Re: Advice please
« Reply #13 on: July 11, 2014, 09:47:37 pm »
Thanks for the comments, Peoples. The word raw seems to be slightly offensive to some and liked by others. I may change it or eliminate it altogether.

I just tell people it's pure, homemade honey.   ;D
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #14 on: July 11, 2014, 10:39:52 pm »
Strained, not filtered...   sort of like shaken, not stirred?
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #15 on: July 11, 2014, 11:16:31 pm »
"The word raw seems to be slightly offensive to some and liked by others. I may change it or eliminate it altogether.
Riverbee, I coarsley strain it. Just enough to get the bee legs and ant heads out of it. You can see bits of pollen and sometimes a little wax in it.
I mainly want to convey that this is not Walmart honey. It's as close to eating it straight out of the hive as you can get. "


thanks rc. the word 'raw' is not offensive to me, i think many times customers get too confused on all the definitions and descriptions of honey, and what the difference is.  to me 'raw honey' indicates honey straight out of the extractor with no filtering, so whatever's in it, is in it.  that's how i think of 'raw' honey.  i have had many folks ask me about all the buzz terminology.....mostly 'raw', 'unprocessed', 'organic', etc.  i keep it simple (labeling) and describe to my customers how my honey is extracted if asked.   all my label says right now is rush river gold wildflower honey.......that's what it is and it really sells itself. i do like the pure and natural, and locally produced.  sort of working on a new label for myself.

the national honey board on 'raw honey':
"While there is no official definition of “raw” honey, it generally means honey that has not been heated or filtered."

some states do have definitions in place.

what really matters is......your honey aint' no walmart honey, it's the real thing from your bees and you the beekeeper.   ;)

ps. i realize some folks think honey is honey......until they buy your honey and they never buy the junk sold in the grocery stores again.
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #16 on: July 12, 2014, 11:53:30 am »
I've always liked the word 'Local' on honey jars. That also helps people with allergies know that the local honey will help with that ailment.

Or:

        HONEY
straight from the hive
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #17 on: July 30, 2014, 09:14:50 pm »
After thinking on this thing for a while, I decided to let someone who knows what they're doing have a go at it. I uploaded the label to a designer, told her what I was looking for and she came up with this:





What do you think?

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Re: Advice please
« Reply #18 on: July 30, 2014, 09:53:32 pm »
That aught to catch a few eyes in passing. Look great to me, but I liked the original label as well so.... Might not be the best to ask...   :-[
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Re: Advice please
« Reply #19 on: July 30, 2014, 10:19:08 pm »
I like it.
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